PDT Garnet Alpha/Chapters/001/Production

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When Mid January.
Where Lucia's dojo.
Who Victoria, Lucia, Arys, Elin, Lea, Jeanne
Why Victoria wants to enter the Tournament. Jeanne wants to challenge her.
What do they do Victoria trains with Lucia. Jeanne challenges her.
What is the obstacle or enemy Lucia as the opponent fighter. Jeanne as an unexpected rival.
The Answer How they overcome the obstacle
The start A battle between two Bishoujo Senshis. An overview of the world and some fighters. Double splash of Lucia and her dojo students with a stadium in the background.
The end Jeanne appears and challenge her in the middle of her training.

Structure[edit]

Scene Pages
First Scene Victoria training with Lucia.
Event 1 Flashback of Victoria's childhood.
Event 2 Presentation of the other dojo students.
Event 3 Victoria confronts Arys.
Last Scene Jeanne appears to challenge her.

Name Flowchart[edit]

Scene # Panel Description Text Draft Line Flats Color BG Render
Victoria Training with Lucia 1 A book surrounded by light in an altar.
There are countless secrets in this world. Hidden in mysterious books.
2 An overview of a map with higlighted places.
Only the chosen ones would be able to unleash those secrets.
3 A huge library from the top, lots of levels and shelves.
From huge libraries...
4 A tiny library full of books, even on the floor.
To the humble ones...
5 Three librarians, human, elf and wizard-looking. Searching on the shelves and reading books.
They work hard to gather all the books...'
Traveling and fighting in...
6 TEXT
The Pretty Deadly Tournament
7 Victoria close to camera, Lucia to the background. Fighting pose. Both in an exterior tatami. A dojo in the background.
Lucia: Is that all?
Victoria: You wish! I'm just warming up!
8 Close up of Victoria
Victoria: Here I come!!!
8.1 Victoria pose.
9 Lucia grinning.
Lucia: Are you?
9.1 Lucia pose.
10 Victoria jumps high in the air.
SFX
11 Victoria kicking down.
Victoria: Aaaah!
12 Lucia jumps back.
Lucia: Too slow!
13 Victoria kicks the ground.
Lucia: You talk too much. Focus.
Victoria: Nnghh... Let's go on.
14 Lucia kicks Victoria. -
15 Victoria falls back.
16 Victoria jumps to punch Lucia.
17 Lucia judo the fuck up of Victoria. (Taboo Tattoo ch.1 p.4)
18 Victoria stands up.
Victoria: You had luck this time...
19 Lucia close-up
Lucia: I'm not that sure about that.
20 Victoria punches Lucia in the chest (Taboo Tatoo ch.1 p.13)
21 Victoria close up.
Victoria: You were saying?
22 Lucia on the ground.
Lucia: You got lucky this time.
23 Victoria smiles.
Victoria: Is that so?
24 Victoria kicks Lucia. (Taboo Tatoo ch.1 p.31)
25 Victoria kicks Lucia. (Taboo Tatoo ch.1 p.31)
26 Victoria kicks Lucia. (Taboo Tatoo ch.1 p.35)
Victoria's childhood flashback. 27
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Victoria Training with Lucia Ending 42 Lucia jumps. (Taboo Tatto ch.1 p.33)
Lucia: You'll learn now!!!
43 Lucia holds a knife to Victoria's neck.
Lucia: You are not ready.
44 Victoria falls.
Victoria: How... when... where??
45 Lucia packs her knife. (https://xcdn-226.bato.to/00003/images/29/1d/291dd613db5296921c2d8c5b71a4cf7c4dcc80bc_620967_1078_1638.jpg?acc=GYJ7IjpMqxjFTMFukIqBew&exp=1622844136)
Lucia: Told ya.
46 Victoria tries to punch Lucia. (https://xcdn-226.bato.to/00003/images/78/43/78433224509071ad3a0199180ccb3a2bfac8bbe6_894550_2000_1473.jpg?acc=QBZmcOnLX9O3NxGtDFM9ag&exp=1622844136)
Victoria: Haaaah!
47 Lucia jumps back.
Lucia: Calm down kid. Let's talk inside.
48 Victoria close up.
Victoria: Hng.
49 Both walking to the dojo.
Lucia: I have something to tell you.
Presentation of the other dojo students. 50
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Victoria confronts Arys 71
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Jeanne appears to challenge her 81
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